TheBlackNote
52 posts
May 24, 2009
9:30 PM
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I was wondering if anybody would be willing to critique my music. Constructive is all I ask positive or negative. Just click the link in my signature. ----------
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Last Edited by on May 24, 2009 9:31 PM
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Patrick Barker
302 posts
May 24, 2009
9:50 PM
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I like the modern feel you're going for- pretty cool stuff.
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"Without music, life would be a mistake" -Nietzsche
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Aussiesucker
287 posts
May 24, 2009
10:19 PM
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Nice sound & as Patrick said -modern. Enjoyable.
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TheBlackNote
53 posts
May 24, 2009
10:26 PM
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Thank you guys I really appreciate it.
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ZackPomerleau
91 posts
May 24, 2009
10:32 PM
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Okay so I listened. First off, I think you had decent tone, but I do think that you should add some more vibrato. At times when you need it I'm not hearing it, and in the right places can add so much to your music. That is one thing to think about.
Listening to the music though, I find the harmonica out of place. I think if you were to utilize maybe third position you could get much more out of the tracks, and maybe even using some digital effect processors. It would really blend it in. Reverb would help combine it into the track.
One thing I like is that you're not overplaying. You allow space which is incredibly important considering this genre of music is based off the beat. Maybe you should try using the harmonica more percussively?
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TheBlackNote
54 posts
May 24, 2009
10:55 PM
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Zack that is true about the the vibrato. I am still working on that? Any tips? Also I should work as a unit with track, thank you.
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DutchBones
180 posts
May 25, 2009
1:33 AM
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Darn.... your link shows up in Japanese (japanese version of "My Space") which is ok since I'm in Japan, but it seems that I need a new version of Flash Player..... is there another place (youtube etc) where I can listen?
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ZackPomerleau
93 posts
May 25, 2009
8:48 AM
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Of course BlackNote. Vibrato is tough to learn, it's always the hardest for me to learn new vibrato. It's about making -uh-uh-uh noises in your throat. Do it slow and you'll learn to o it with speed.
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TheBlackNote
55 posts
May 25, 2009
11:10 PM
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Thanks Nacoran thats the mood I was goings. Also I am sorry no youtube yet.
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TheBlackNote
56 posts
May 26, 2009
6:13 PM
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Also working on two rock themed tracks.
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